Magazine advert final


This is the final version of my magazine advert, which I will be submitting as my ancillary task.


Feedback on my advertisement

This is the feedback which I have collected from someone who is in my target audience and they have told me what they think is good about it and whats effective. Although she hasn’t stated what I can improve on it I will still make adjustments on things which were not mentioned as being good as I want it to be theĀ  most effective on my target audience it can be.